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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 15, 2019 17:58:56 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 1): The fall of Green Light Bearer
The structure of the kingdom
Green Light Bearer's position
A pre epidemic race
Envy
The recruitment
The rebellion and great war
The judgement of Green Light Bearer
The creation of man
The sacrifice and the star warriors
Hero or Villian?
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 2): Planet Peridot
The ecosystem on planet Peridot
Odd meets a green eagle (looks like earth's golden eagle but is green and gold plus bleeds the colour green)
Velociraptors
Utah raptors
Dangers in the oceans
Odd's arrogance
A green auroch
Grounder Pounder to the rescue
The pale green knight's visit
The pale green knight's rulership
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 3): Odd goes rogue
Caretakeress
Odd goes wild
Oppositional defiance disorder
Planet Paradise
Longing to surpass the level of green star warrior
A pact with Evil Black Death
Counterfeit prosperity
A wrestle
Broken down
Back to square one
Kingdom of Healing and Righteousness (Book 4): Planet Paradise
The largest planet in the universe
Just like planet Peridot
Taken over by Evil Black Death
Faithful few
The green darning Megalodons
Evil Black Death's second favorite planet
Odd the rogue green star warror
The return of Odd
Odd's training
The battle royale
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 5): Vain Glorious
To planet Diamond
A purple and green entity
Animals commanded and raptured
Animals which were left behind
A change in planet Diamond
The rogue purple star warrior
A fight
In the north pole
In the south pole
The defeat of Vain Glorious
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 6): Green Mantis
The birth of a vile baby
Marked out by Evil Black Death
Captured by the governmental officials
To Titan, Saturn's moon
The weakest of the team
A pact with Evil Black Death
The rise of the pale green knight
Aliens vs predators
To earth
Taking over the governments
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 7): The judgement of Green Light Bearer/Evil Black Death and the pale green knight
The earth becomes a giant hellhole
The law of the pale green knight
The ability of the pale green knight
The remnant of the star warriors
Final Warrior
The mark of the pale green knight
The faithfulness of Final Warrior
The second coming
The lime fiery sulfuric lake
Green Light Bearer/ Evil Black Death's last stand.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 15, 2019 18:21:09 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 1): The fall of Green Light Bearer
The structure of the kingdom
In the beginning, the Three Creators ruled the Green Kingdom of Healing and Righteousness. After the Emperor of Life payed the foundations on the Kingdom, he handed it to His Son Delivering King. Healing Sustainer was sent out to create all of creation and that included all of creation. Before that, the knights and creatures of the kingdom were created and so were the creatures and thrones etc. Everything in the kingdom was alive and had the gift of speech and reason. Some of the creatures were even larger than the largest animal on earth. The three knights closest to the Throne of Righteousness and Healing were the Warring Knight of Righteousness, the Messanger of Healing, and Green Light Bearer. The Warring Knight of Righteousness was meant to lead the knights in battle should war arrive. The Messager of Healing is to bring the Three Creator's message to any of the knights to fulfill the Three Creators must first come through him and that includes Warring Knight of Righteousness and Messanger of Healing.
The Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing is governed by the Three Creators on the throne of Righteousness and Healing which is cyan in colour. The surrounding kingdom is green in colour and all the other thrones around are purple, white, pale green, green, lime, orange, and red just like the stars in the sky.
This story will focus on Nick/HeroandVillain or GoodAndEvilMan who becomes the vessel of Green Light Bearer/Evil Black Death who has been thrown out off the Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing forever.
Green Light Bearer's position
Green Light Bearer position is like the grand vicer. All who desires to come to the Three Creators must first come to Green Light Bearer and the includes the Healing Messanger and Warring Knight of Righteousness. Green Light Bearer glows green and is the brightest and most beautiful of all subjects in the Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing.
Green Light Bearer has also been given control of earth and one third of the knights are directly under his command. These are the knights which patrol earth frequently.
A pre epidemic race
Green Light Bearer's job was to present the glory of the Three Creators to a pre epidemic race on earth. The pre epidemic race are the centaurs, griffins, sirens, and other fantasy creatures seen today on films on tv. They are much larger than mankind today - some as tall as 50 foot giants which is what inspired tranformers to be invented. The pre epidemic race also built many ancient cities which are more beautiful than our cities today.
Envy
Over time Green Light Bearer envied the position Delivering King held. Only Delivering King and Healing Sustainer gets to see the fullness of the Emperor of Life whom no mortal might see Him face to face and live. Even Green Light Bearer does not get to do so.
The recruitment
Green Light Bearer began to use his charm and influence to recruite his knights on earth and the pre epidemic race to form a rebellion. This happened after many many years.
The rebellion and great war
The rebellion led to a great war. Warring Knight of Righteousness faught evenly with Green Light Bearer (who came from earth in an attempt to take over the throne of Righteousness and Healing. However, Warring Knight of Righteousness ultimately won and tied up Green Light Bearer with the rope of Justice.
The judgement of Green Light Bearer
The Three Creators cast Green Light Bearer out of the Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing after renaming him Evil Black Death together with his knights. This cause a massive distruction which killed the bodies of the pre epidemic race and left the cities in ruins. All the knights and the pre epidemic race were chained below the earth including Evil Black Death though he could freely come to the surface whenever he wanted too.
The creation of man
Man was created on the sixth day after the earth was renewed and replenished with other creatures. The first man, however, feel after listening to his wife instead of Delivering King and partook of the Forbidden Fruit in the center of the Beautiful Garden.
The sacrifice and the star warriors
Overtime, the seed of mankind was corrupted by knights which have left their positions and breed with the women and this is why the giants appeared and ruled the land. The Three Creators had no choice but to destroy earth with a flood but eight people were spared on a the giant wooden boat. Despite that the seed of man continued to be corrupted. Emperor of Life decided to sent Delivering King to earth as a Man. Delivering King, however, was ultimately killed by agents of Evil Black Death on a sacrificial altar.
Delivering King rose again on the Third Day and took the keys of Doom and Death out of Evil Black Death's hand and gave His followers the ability to become star warriors: the purple star warriors being the most powerful followed by the white star warriors.
Hero or Villian?
Many many years later, a young man without royalty named GoodAndEvilMan/ HeroOrVillain took over the earth's government with charm after selling his soul to Evil Black Death on Titan one of Saturn's moons becoming the pale green knight.
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Post by creature386 on Mar 15, 2019 21:28:29 GMT 5
Not sure if I already told you, but I think you should make a thread for all your book series since you have like four of them. This can also help you to eliminate redundancy, Kingdom of Light also has a story about Green Light Bearer's fall, for example.
I'm sure the transformers would have been invented much earlier had they been inspired by ancient, pre-Flood creatures.
The story itself is extremely similar to the Bible which is not necessarily bad as long as you remember to add your own twists to it.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 2:14:54 GMT 5
Don't worry I am only going to post one story in here. The rest (of these with similar versions) will remain in carnivora.
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Post by creature386 on Mar 16, 2019 2:47:19 GMT 5
Do you mean only one book or only one book series?
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 3:11:50 GMT 5
I meant only one book series. Only the Green Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing will be posted here. If I were to make any other story, it would be about a scientist named Mr.Field who went on a journey to soace on a newly made high tech train to space to discover a new planet/s - a bit similar but there are no animals with the gift of speech and reason.
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Post by creature386 on Mar 16, 2019 3:28:56 GMT 5
OK. While I already know the books from Carnivora, I'm curious to what the WoA crowd thinks, so bring 'em on!
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:28:08 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 2): Planet Peridot
The ecosystem on planet Peridot
Odd heard that planet Peridot was a refreshing planet to got to. Odd asked Delivering King to take him there. Delivering King said yes on condition Odd quickly does what he needs to do and get out of there. The next day, Odd found himself at the refreshing green planet, it had lime soil, and green sparkling ocean, and a bright green sky. The soil was filled with green precious stones called peridots giving the planet its name. Odd saw many living in leisure and pleasure but he remembered he had a higher call than that and was reminded not just by Delivering King but also by Grounder Pounder and Musician.
The animals on the planet were the same weight and size as earth's animals and they bleed green. Odd goes to the north pole and meets up with the peridot/ lime ice bears (which are the same size and weight as the polar bears on earth). They bow down to Odd before turning into green stars and transferring their power to Odd before being raptured to the Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing but not before reminding the young man to remain humble.
Odd meets a green eagle (looks like earth's golden eagle but is green and gold plus bleeds the colour green)
Odd now a green star warrior left the north pole and headed down south. Odd was taken up a hill where a green lime eagle met him. The green eagles looked just like the golden eagles on earth and all of them remained faithful to Delivering King. The larges was a female named Aquila. Aquila had powerful feet and was eating a dead fox at that time but her wing was injured due to injury from a peridot wolverine.
Velociraptors
The velociraptors arrived in the nick of time. They became lime stars and stayed around to protect Odd from the wolverines. Odd asked the velociraptors about the history of dinasaurs and got his answer.
Utah raptors
Using their freedom choice. The green and lime eagles came down from the lime skies to aid Odd and the velociraptors. One of the utah raptors ( a big female ) tried to come close but was killed by the combine efforts of Odd and Aquila.
Dangers in the oceans
Odd then went to the oceans a saw a female green pointer shark which had already defected herself to Evil Black Death. A green Megalodon suddenly explodes out of the water and kills the green pointer. Odd realised the sea is full of danger and sea scorpions are also present awaiting Odd to carelessly jump into the sea. Thankfully the eagle warned him and Odd did not enter the waters despite the warnings of the latter. Odd was nearly killed by the sea scorpions but the peridoe skuams came and killed them scorpion which the young man had for dinner.
Odd's arrogance
Odd met Nurturer on the way and he became arrogant. Thats when the animals loyal to the Three Creators quickly got raptured. Odd now self suficient took Nurturer under his wing and made a pack with Evil Black Death.
A green auroch
Odd was further going his marry way when he a green auroch which chased him. Odd shot powers and tried to kill it but to no a wail.
Grounder Pounder to the rescue
Odd was rescued by Grounder Pounder who invited Odd to join him but the young man must give up Nurturer who would not let Odd go. Odd choosed Nurturer and that is the beginning of evil Odd's life.
The pale green knight's visit
Many years later, the pale green knight arrived to calm down the chaos in the planet. The animals which have defected to Evil Black Death have multiplied even more after the rapture of the animals loyal to Delivering King.
The pale green knight's rulership
The pale green knight then became the ruler of the planet. The pale green knight used the powers given to him by Evil Blac Death and transported the animals to earth with his portal.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:31:26 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 3): Odd goes rogue
Caretakeress
Caretakeress had been a faithful follower of Delivering King ever since she was a young girl. However, despite becoming a young woman, she is still a girl in terms of manerism and behaviour. Her nick named is Mis Strong as she doesn't know how to receive chilvary from men as she had a mother who always wanted to be in control and a father who was passive even though both her parents are powerful star warriors. Caretakeress also acts as a self sufficient individual and has rejected every men who attempted to get to know her as more than a friend. One night as a young woman to planet Amertyst where she commanded the purple ocean dolphins and became a purple star warrior. She is strong and didn't need much oversight and Grounder Pounder gave her a leadership position immediately. Caretakeress was also a very talented young woman and she recruited many new followers of Delivering King to Headship Fellowship Gathering and trained many green star warriors on planet amertyst. She also became good friends with Odd before he became an arrogant rogue star warrior.
Odd goes wild
Odd became wild after leaving Headship Fellowship Gathering yet remained in contact with Caretakeress. Caretakeress was hesitant to tell Odd that his self centered, childish, and narcissistic behavior has sky rocketed. Odd who had developed a new level of charm (will be explained later) took out Nurturer who was already offended by Grounder Pounder, the leader of Headship Fellowship Gathering. Not only that, Odd took out all the star warriors under Caretakeress training leaving her in a depress mode especially after her father left earth to enter the Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing forever. Caretakeress began to isolate herself from the rest of Headship Fellowship Gathering.
Oppositional defiance disorder
Odd's oppositional defiance disorder/ rebellion also sky rocketed and he forgot that this is what got Green Light Bearer ousted from the Green Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing and renamed Evil Black Death. Odd became rogue and he became a purple star warrior after commanding the ameryst ice bears (which immediately opt to be raptured rather than remain on the planet any longer after becoming purple stars as they couldn't stand the stench of Odd's rebellion and smart alec remarks.
Planet Paradise
Odd also obtained dark powers and he transported himself to planet Paradise. Planet Paradise is the largest planet in the universe with bright green soil and sea plus a lime sky and orbits around a green star. That planet is much bigger than planet Diamond but has just the same gravity pull strength. The animals on planet Paradise are seven times heavier than the animals on earth. The first animal spotted by Odd is a greyish green toxodon eating plants. The toxodon looked at Odd and ran away as it couldn't stand his rebellion and the dark aura around him and didn't want to be commanded. Odd was not looking for Toxodons but the green darning ice bears of the north pole. On the way, Odd bumped into a green giant short faced bear which has already defected to Evil Black Death. Surprisingly that animal left Odd alone. An amphicyon arrivved and took Odd to the north pole. How did this happen?
Longing to surpass the level of green star warrior
Odd for a while has been longing to surpass the level of a green star warrior but due to his oppositional defiance disorder wanted to use the short cut instead of using the long road of suffering to build up his character. Odd is also a vain man/boy and takes endless selfies of himself more so than many women does. Odd wanted to get into the popular group in the Fellowship Gatherings which is why he did not commit himself to Headship Fellowship Gathering in the first place. Bascially Odd has become a traitor and has become Evil Odd.
A pact with Evil Black Death
Odd officially became Evil Odd after he made a pact with Evil Black Death who gave him the ability to charm and to look good yet he could still never get a girlfriend as the former Green Light Bearer is a liar despite letting Odd enjoy counterfeit prosperity and the promise to rule planet Paradise (an idea sold to him by Evil Black Death) in exchange for his betrayal.
Counterfeit prosperity
Odd obtained a lot of counterfeit prosperity as he managed to get the amertyst ice bears and the green darning ice bears to get rptured after they became purple and green stars respectively. Odd also managed to charm girls using his superficial charm but he still couldn't get a girlfriend and he wondered why. Odd, however, has obtained dark powers to teleport from one place to another and to command powerful animals which made him even more arrogant but he didn't know these animals were only obedient to Delivering King (by obeying Odd)despite the fact the animals were passing on the power of green and purple and lime stars before being raptured as they couldn't stand Odd's rebellious stench. Odd though he was great and has now became the ruler of planet Paradise. Litte did Odd realise he was in for a rude shock.
A wrestle
After the animals loyal to Delivering King were raptured, there was nothing left to protect Odd. Evil Black Death on the south pole saw the perfect opportunity to get rid of Odd and appeared to the north pole and mocked him. Evil Black Death also surrounded Odd by commanding the green darning leopard seals and walruses. Odd faught back and managed to cut down a leopard seal. A walrus, however, knocked Odd to the ground. Evil Black Death appeared and the walrus backed off. Evil Black Death told Odd it was time for him to serve the former Green Light Bearer, however, Odd spoke back in a smart alec way. Evil Black Death used the dark powers around Odd to torture him and now showed the young man his true colours.
Broken down
Green Light Bearer/ Evil Black Death told Odd that he could have planet Paradise if he manges to clear a gauntlet of six animals. These six animals are a emerald rat, a rainbow scorpion, a paradise hyena, a green headed vulture, a lime wolf, and finally a green short faced bear. Odd used the powers he had and the powers Evil Black Death had indirectly given him through rebellion to kill the rat and rainbow scorpion. The paradise hyena proved to be a problem for Odd but he managed to slice off her head. The green headed vulture attacked from above but Odd managed to slay it. The wolf leap on Odd but the young man pierced it on time. Now it is the green giant short faced bears turned. Odd manage to slaughter it after a long fight. Evil Black Death, however, being a liar unleashed a t rex upon him. Odd fought the t rex but Evil Black Death possessed the t rex and the t rex crushed Odd. Odd's end was close but then Grounder Pounder, Musician, and Serious arrived and sliced the t rex into two by working together. Musician and serious distracted the t rex which was possessed by Evil Black Death allowing Grounder Pounder to make the final blow.
Back to square one
Grounder Pounder took Odd around planet Paradise and showed the young man the consequence of his rebellion and causing the animals loyal to Delivering King to be raptured. The planet is now in chaos as the animals are fighting among themselves and killing each other while Evil black Death watched with pleasure. Odd was taken back to earth by Healing Sustainer and he had to start where he was all over again from square one. Odd had to start again as a nobody at age 31.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:32:42 GMT 5
Kingdom of Healing and Righteousness (Book 4): Planet Paradise
The largest planet in the universe
Planet Paradise is the largest planet in the universe and is 100 times larger than earth. It has a gravity pull slightly weaker than that of the much smaller planet Diamond. This planet has lime soil, a bright green sky, and sparkling green sea. This planet was offered to Odd.
Just like planet Peridot
Planet Peridot is basically a smaller version of planet Paradise except for its animals are all green and gold unlike planet Paradise which has more colourful animals (males and females have different colours) making planet Paradise to be also known as planet Dragonfly.
Taken over by Evil Black Death
Planet Paradise and Peridot has been taken over by Evil Black Death and become worse than planet Ruby.
Faithful few
The faithful animals such as the green ice bears have been raptured to Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing.
The green darning Megalodons
The green darning Megalodons together with the basilosaurus and manosaurs are the most powerful animals on the planet and have defected to Evil Black Death.
Evil Black Death's second favorite planet
Planet Paradise is Evil Black Death's favorite planet after earth as it reminded him of his former position as Green Light Bearer.
Odd the rogue green star warrior
Odd became a rogue green star warrior and he enjoyed many pleasures for a while but he finally suffered the consequences.
The return of Odd
Odd repented and went under Grounder Pounder's training but he also created Evil Odd as in order to get rid of the influence of Evil Black Death, he had to seperate himself from the evil in him which left to follow Evil Black Death becoming Evil Odd.
Odd's training
Odd had strict training from Grounder Pounder and Musician. Serious would not put up with any of his smart alec ways to prevent Evil Odd from returning.
The battle royale
Planet Paradise is a planet where the battle royale began.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:33:15 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 5): Vain Glorious
To planet Diamond
Isolated Warrior and his men were taken to planet Diamond's isolated island by Healing Sustainer where the white bears with green skin lived. However, Vain Glorious decided to abandon the group believing his freedom was restricted and abandoned the group to the south pole of green diamonds with red and black diamonds in the heart of the south pole and made a pact with Green Light Bearer/ Evil Black Death made his throne.
A purple and green entity
Vain Glorious received dark powers to teleport himself freely wherever he wants to and became a purple and green star warrior.
Animals commanded and raptured
Vain Glorious commanded many animals and caused them to be raptured. Some of these animals were the white ice bears with green skin and their leader was known as Iorek/ George.
Animals which were left behind
Most of the animals left behind were the ones which have defected to Evil Black Death. A few of them remained loyal to the Three Creators (e.g. the souropods, the lemmings, the white bears, the white birds, the purple eagles, the purple tiger quolls etc).
A change in planet Diamond
This paved the way for HeroAndVillain to transport animals from earth to planet Diamond. The same result as in the Royal Purple Kingdom book happened.
The rogue purple star warrior
Vain glorious became a purple rogue star warrior.
A fight
Vain Glorious tried to rebel against Evil Black Death but the darks powers were used by the former Green Light Bearer to torture him.
In the north pole
Vain Glorious headed to the north pole to command the white ice bears ( they are scaled up versions of polar bears and they bleed teal).
In the south pole
The south pole is inhabited by lime leopard seals and lime, black, and red skuas and penguins of all colours as well as lime elephant seals.
The defeat of Vain Glorious
Vain Glorious was defeated on planet Jade.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:34:35 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 6): Green Mantis
The birth of a vile baby
Twelve years before the birth of Final Warrior, a vile baby was born. He is often refered to as son of Evil Black Death by the Book of Righteousness and Healing which not only reveals Delivering King's likes and dislikes and how to live as star warriors but also exposes Green Light Bearer/ Evil Black Death and how to fight him. A vile baby was born to a single mother of mix heritage and that baby boy was born when that woman obtained sperm from artificial insemination. That baby cries day and night and unlike Delivering King who was subject to His earthly adopted parents when He came as a Child, this other child was rebellious from the womb. His name is HeroAndVilain.
When he became a boy, he was ostracized from his peers because he was different. He was rejected and considered the bottom of the barrel and picked on for not knowing his father.
Marked out by Evil Black Death
Little did anyone know he is marked out by Evil Black Death. Evil Black Death's secret society often marks out bullied kids and teenagers and recruit them.
Captured by the governmental officials
By ten, his mother gave him away to the governmental officials who run Titan's special secret forces. They made it look like a kidnap has happened and they took away HeroAndVilain in his sleep.
To Titan, Saturn's moon
HeroAndVilain was taken to saturn's moon called Titan. With highly advanced technology, the journey only took a surprising few hours.
The weakest of the team
HeroAndVilain was deemed the weakest in the team and was placed among the GreenMantis team where the nerds and losers are placed. This is because HeroAndVilain is extremely smart and can answer mathematical sums that surpasses four units. He was often picked on by the Red Dragons and the Purple Griffins.
A pact with Evil Black Death
The night before his 13 birthday, HeroAndVilain made a pact with Evil Black Death to serve him if he allows him to rule the world and universe and to have revenge on his bullies. The next day, the leader of the red dragons pushed down HeroAndVilain but instead of cowering in fear, he got back up and with his new found 'superhuman' strength, choked the much bigger bully and the officials had a hard time getting him off despite his small size. HeroAndVilain released the bully as he begged for mercy as he wanted to use them for his purposes.
The rise of the pale green knight
HeroAndVilain impressed the head of Titan's special secret forces that he allowed HeroAndVilain to work directly under him. HeroAndVilain commanded the bully and everyone else to call him the pale green knight as he came from the Green Mantis team.
Aliens vs predators
The pale green knight also made a pact with the predators that he will send the finest of his men into their battle royale as sacrificed for the face huggers and he took revenge by sending the the members of the other six teams into the arena and even ordered the predators to capture his leader. This went on for another eleven years until Final Warrior was kidnapped.
To earth
After the battle royale was destroyed by Final Warrior, HeroAndVilain teleported to earth after he teleported from planet to planet to calm down the chaos and win the animals with the gift of speech and reason over (e.g. green hybrid bears, peridot tigers, periodot hippos, scarlet hippos etc). After commanding the scientist under him to create portals with their high tech machines to bring his minions from other planets to earth, he revealed himself as the pale green knight.
Taking over the governments
The pale green knight won over the governments by charm and flattery and revealed his mark a microchip to be placed in the forehead or right hand.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 16, 2019 10:35:20 GMT 5
Kingdom of Righteousness and Healing (Book 7): The judgement of Green Light Bearer/Evil Black Death and the pale green knight
The earth becomes a giant hellhole
Three and a half years later, the whole earth becomes a hell hole. Isolated Warrior was executed shortly after refusing the mark and the mental was passed on to his successor, Final Warrior.
The law of the pale green knight
The pale green knight abolished all culture and tradition and demanded to be the only one who is followed after.
The ability of the pale green knight
The pale green knight has the ability to teleport from one place to another and even turn into a bright green dragon and has the powers of a blackhole, a white star, a purple star, a green star, a lime star, and a yellow star in him.
The remnant of the star warriors
The remnant of star warriors have become purple star warriors.
Final Warrior
Final Warrior is the leader of the purple star warriors and he inherited Isolated Warrior's power.
The mark of the pale green knight
The mark of the pale green knight is now made compulsory. These who refused it will be put to death but these who do take it on will be thrown in the Lime Sulfuric Fiery Lake.
The faithfulness of Final Warrior
Final Warrior held on faithfully even in several near death experiences. He fought with the pale green knight to buy time for his men to escape. Although Final Warrior was bigger, he realised he is no match for the pale green knight especially when he becomes a bright green dragon.
The second coming
Final Warrior endured until the second coming of Delivering King.
The lime fiery sulfuric lake
The lime fiery sulfuric lake is worst than the center of the earth. HeroAndVilain and his One world prophet was thrown into the lime green sulfuric lake while Evil Black Death was chained in the center of the earth for a thousand years.
Green Light Bearer/ Evil Black Death's last stand
After a thousand years, Green Light Bearer/Evil Black Death was released for a while to deceive the whole earth once again. He managed to charm a large army and they march towards the City of Righteousness and Healing which has landed on earth. White fire came out and devoured Delivering King's foes and this resulted in Evil Black Death being thrown into the lime green fiery sulfuric lake where he will be tormented forever and ever.
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Post by creature386 on Mar 17, 2019 17:46:49 GMT 5
I've never asked you about your target audience, so what is it?
Older audiences might have problems with a villain like Evil Black Death.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Mar 17, 2019 18:51:22 GMT 5
I think I am targeting audience that are between 13 to 40 years old.
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