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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 14:59:13 GMT 5
Prologue:
In the year 3000, earth which has been renamed planet Chess is now ruled by robots and AIs. It has a long time since the last man who was working as a ranger has retired and has been replaced by an AI. Since, then the running of the animal parks especially the 'Prehistoric Bird Park' - the largest bird park on earth has become more efficient. Many tours were organised year after year. However, unknown to mankind, there was a secret area where battle royales between animals and cryptics are frequently organised. How long will it be before this secret is eventually found out.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 14:59:32 GMT 5
Chapters:
All about the Prehistoric Bird Park and its ecology.
The cryptics - animals and humanoids.
A tour.
Sight seeing.
Safety first.
A battle royale.
Survivors.
The outbreak.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 14:59:59 GMT 5
Chapter 1: All about the Prehistoric Bird Park and its ecology.
The scene starts with a 400 pound female Titanis was roaming the grasslands. There she hunts any animal she can overpower. How she ended up alone was a mystery, she was probably ousted from her flock which did not want to increase their numbers anymore. The Titanis saw a huge bison carcass and ran towards it but stopped her tracks when she saw a Californian grizzly feeding on the carcass. The Californian grizzly which weighs 2200 pounds would easily crush her. The was a dead smilodon populator nearby and other tracks etc. While a Californian grizzly bear is capable of killing a bull bison, he prefers to take away kills from smilodon populators. In this case the Californian grizzly killed one male smilodon and displaced the rest of the small pride. The Titanis knowing she is no match for the bear wisely backed away. The Titanis continued her search for a kill and finally found a small horse like animal. The Titanis quickly took it down. As the Titanis was gorging down meat with her powerful beak, she was surrounded by a pack of dire wolves which wanted the kill. The Titanis lashed out and kicked at one of the dire wolves, killing it almost instantly, however being overwhelmed, she was forced to flee.
The 'Prehistoric Bird Park' was built when samples of extinct birds taken from fossils and clones were created. The cloning was proven successful and before long the bird park became filled with these birds and other extinct animals from the past. The Prehistoric Park was also filled with many different types of plants and insects many which no one knew about. This park also occupies a part of the red area and indigo area in planet Chess and every year a tour will be hosted by the AIs which have become the rangers of the park.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:00:26 GMT 5
Chapter 2: The cryptics - animals and humanoids.
The reason why the original rangers in the 'Prehistoric Bird Park' was replaced with AIs is because of one thing. This is because the park was filled with dangerous cryptics such as Yowie warriors, orang pendek, nandi bears, northern giants, neatherdal men, ape men, bear beast, giant snallygasters, bray road beasts, big foots, Emela Nautkas, dinosaurs etc. Some of theses animal cryptics are capable of killing even aliens and dinosaurs. These cryptics and dinosaurs are dangerous to human rangers especially the Yowie warriors, orang pendek, nearthedal man, and ape/cave men. These humanoid cryptics especially are canibals and all but one human ranger escaped. From that they on they rangers were replaced with AIs made out of the hardest metal which are run by Skynet who controls all AIs and robots.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:00:54 GMT 5
Chapter 3: A tour.
A rich newly wedded couple (Atkins and Akema) and a bunch of rowdy college graduates decided to book a tour to Prehistoric Park. They booked a Camper van and tour bus respectively. Due to the dangers from the presence of humanoid human cryptic cannibals, these that decide to go on a tour have to have well behaved children (if they are bringing any), and the vehicles are made out of the toughest metal and is automatically driven by themselves. The tour will last for two weeks and every night before everyone goes to sleep, an automatic tough shield (just like a shield around batman's automobile) will go around the tour bus to protect the people inside. Travelers can choose to go in a tour bus or camper vans which will provide automatic toilets and bathrooms. The vehicles will allow the doors to be unlock and the AI rangers will give the people a guided tour and bring them back to the tour bus or camper van before night. When they reach the middle of the park and when the AIs ensured everything was safe, the married couple and the youth were taken on a guided tour every time the vehicles unlock themselves. Atkins and Akema were irritated by the rowdy college graduates and said, " We were more mature than these kids when we were their age)".
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:01:17 GMT 5
Chapter 4: Sight seeing.
Sight seeing was extremely pleasant as the cool wind blew on the faces of the married couple as well as the youth. The married couple enjoyed a time of romance under the sun and near the beach (the 'Prehistoric Bird Park' is so huge that it consists of even a huge beach of its own). AI 1 warned the married couple and the youth not to wander too far as there are dangerous cryptics there. Suddenly, a flock of giant ostriches were running away fast. The youth, guided by the AI rangers went to take a look. A huge female tyranosaurus rex was facing off an Emela Nautka, a horned lizard the same size as an African bush elephant and known as the 'elephant killer'. The fight begins, the Emela N charges the t rex which manages to dodge her opponent which would have been able to match the force of an African elephant. The t rex was narrowly gored by that horn which could have inflicted serious damage. T t rex gave the Emela N a good bite in the neck before kicking him over and finishing off the horned lizard. A triceratops would have defeated the Emela N given its better protection and being a difficult opponent for the t rex. A few of the youth cheered when the tyranosaur killed the emela n. The t rex charged the youth and the AIs held back the t rex while the youth ran back to the tour bus. The married couple could only shake their heads.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:01:38 GMT 5
Chapter 5: Safety first.
As it was getting late, the married couple headed back to the camper van to enjoy their honeymoon. The couple put their safety first as they had recently gotten married and did not want to die during their honeymoon period. As the couple got into the campervan, a shield automatically surrounded the campervan. The youth led by Bryan the boisterous ditched the AIs as it was Friday night and they wanted to have a party but the AIs drove them into the tour bus and turned it into a disco environment. An automatic shield also surrounded the tour bus. In the meantime twenty poachers which have snuck into the Prehistoric Bird Park also prepared to shoot anything (animal or cryptic which they come across).
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:02:05 GMT 5
Chapter 6: A battle royale. The camper van and tour bus had an automatic tv each. That tv was not to watch movies but to watch a battle royale which goes on every night till the break of dawn. Nobody knows that there is an actual battle royale arena in the 'Prehistoric Bird Park'. The battle royale consist of:
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:02:28 GMT 5
Chapter 7: Survivors of the battle royale.
By the end of the battle royale, the surviving Brontornis which killed the poachers were snatched into the air by the snallygasters flew back to their nest to lay their eggs. These snallygasters were genetically modified in such a way that the females did not need males to breed with. As a result, all snallygasters in Prehistoric Bird Park are female. Each snallygaster lays four eggs which hatch int chicks which grow and learn how to fly quickly. One snallygaster weighs 15400 pounds, the same weight as an African bush elephant. The snally gasters are rules by a huge 21 tonne female queen which commands all the other snallygasters. The queen is green in colour and surrounded by four red and purple snallygasters which follow the queen everywhere.
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 21, 2019 15:02:53 GMT 5
Chapter 8: The outbreak.
Before the night was over, the youth and the married couple found themselves surrounded by humanoid canibal cryptics and a snallygaster actually landed on the tour bus causing the youth to scream. The snallygaster attacked the tour bus. The married couple and the youth in their vehicles in the meantime were actually trapped in the battle royale arena as their final stop was actually in the middle of the arena. The automatic shields had done a good job of surrounding drowning out the noise from outside. Its only when one of the poachers climb up the bus in an attempt to escape the orang pendek did the youth finally get the idea where they were at. The youth and the married couple had to wait the whole night before the battle royale arena open and the orang pendek left them alone after finding no way to get pass the automatic shield. They did manage to trap and bring down the snallygaster.
The tour bus and campervan took the youth all the way home but they discovered a problem. The enterance to the 'Prehistoric Bird Park' was broken and chaos was happening in the cities. Without a home to go to the married couple and the youth had to make their home in the vehicles.
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Post by creature386 on Sept 26, 2019 22:25:19 GMT 5
Completely forgot to comment on this.
Reads more like the draft for a movie script than the draft for a book (maybe that's more what you're aiming at).
Disregarding style, I really like the idea of a JP-style theme park in a cyberpunk setting. Reminds me of my own ideas mentioned in the LBM thread. That being said, is there a reason Skynet is so friendly towards mankind?
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Post by DonaldCengXiongAzuma on Sept 27, 2019 6:36:03 GMT 5
The reason why Skynet is so friendly is because he is studying man kind and their behavior for now. I have a second and a third part.
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